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LR 23

Unread postby Nimrod » 21 Mar 2008, 14:50

Daklem, vidim da se traži novi krug. So here it is:

- 300 riječi
- ili first contact ili razviti Clarkovu ideju (http://nosf.net/magazin/natjecaj-clarke/)
- 10 dana

Izjasnite se! :kava:
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby Nimrod » 23 Mar 2008, 11:30

Nitko se ne izjašnjava...
...ALI, ALI - neki su sutori prihvatili izazov i poslali mi priČe. (Bravo! :uzdravlje:)
Ergo, propozocije stoje. :kava:

Pišite!
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English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby Nimrod » 04 May 2008, 15:47

Prošlo je mjesec dana - jeste li spremni na novi krug? :kava:
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby TB » 04 May 2008, 22:15

Nimrod wrote:Prošlo je mjesec dana - jeste li spremni na novi krug? :kava:



Može! :cheers:
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby zordi » 05 May 2008, 17:14

nova sam ali i za :)
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby MrSini » 06 May 2008, 08:45

Nimrod wrote:Prošlo je mjesec dana - jeste li spremni na novi krug? :kava:

:x Hajde sada nemoj razvlačiti. Čekam već 15 dana. :x
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby Nimrod » 06 May 2008, 14:25

ok, ok, samo moram smislit nešto... :dum:
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby MrSini » 06 May 2008, 15:13

Nimrod wrote:ok, ok, samo moram smislit nešto... :dum:


Hajde dok smišljaš pokušajte mi nešto razjasniti. Da li je potrebno u pričama, novelama itd. pojasniti šta je npr. hyperspace, antigravitacija i sl. ?
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby zordi » 06 May 2008, 17:13

po meni ne.
po meni se objašnjavaju samo pojmovi/nazivi koje si eventualno sam izmislio pa da čitatelj zna što je to.
npr. I onda je ona uzela čaromalju - malu kutiju u kojoj... bla-bla ...
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby Izitpajn » 06 May 2008, 17:53

Čak ni to. Razlika između dobrog i lošeg pisanja SF-a (jedna od...) je u tome da čak i stvari koje si potpuno izmislio ne objašnjavaš, nego ostaviš da se shvate iz konteksta. Ako je liku i u društvu o kojemu pišeš jasno što je to "kurburzgud", onda objašnjavanje čitatelja izbacuje iz ritma i stvara osjećaj patroniziranja. Naravno, postoje izuzeci, ali, generalno, infodumpove treba ostaviti za romane iznad 200 kartica.
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Re: LR 23

Unread postby Nimrod » 07 May 2008, 10:33

What Izitpajn says. A mcn na to obično dodaje da ne valja koristiti stvari vezane uz filmove i serije jer osim što to to pokazuje lijenost i nemaštovitost pisca (mislim da su bila ova dva pridjeva), čitatelj možda nije gleda seriju ili film pa neće ni poloviti sve implikacije. (tipa stormtrooper, fazor, Klingonci, itd)
English is the result of Norman soldiers attempting to pick up Anglo-Saxon barmaids, and is no more legitimate than any of the other results.
- H. Beam Piper, from "Fuzzy Sapiens"
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